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What a Commotion

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(We go to the Disrespectoid house at 5:23 a.m., where everyone is asleep & as they were sleeping, something loud woke them up.)

The Disrespectoids: *goes outside in there sleepwear* what was that?

Chuck: it doesn't look like it storming.

Betty: & there'sh no party around our house.

Harry: *yawns* let's go back to sleep.

(so the Distespectoids went back to sleep., until...the loud noise came back and this time it woke everyone in the Doid's neighborhood up)

Everyone in the Doid's neighborhood: what was that?! *so they head outside, looked around, but couldn't find the source of the noise until the noise is heard again*

Everyone & The Disrespectoids: what is going on?!

(they head outside, found out that they all heard the same loud noise, & need to do something about it.)


Lemmy Cooper: how are you going to solve this problem?

Iggy Cooper: follow me.

(they both headed for Iggy's room & 
Iggy pulled out 1 of his inventions, which can find the source of the loud noise and they went outside to show everyone)

Iggy: attention everyone!

Everyone: huh?

Iggy: I have a invention for this problem. the soundwave finder. it can find the loud noise where ever it is.

Everyone: really?

Lemmy: really.

Iggy: watch *turns on the machine, sets it to loud noise, & waits for it to work*

(& in no time, the loud noise was heard, & everyone followed the Cooper brothers to the source of the noise Everyone found that the source of the noise was in town, & wanted to know what was going on. it was Victoria's mother)

Everyone: what is Mrs. Marmalade doing at this time of night?

Mrs. Marmalade: of all the times for me to get a late night snack for me & my family, why is it when the Restaurants are closed?!

Tupley Roco: you needed a late-night snack? Mrs: Marmalade: yes. another Neighbor: but what your doing is not only breaking & entering, but it's also keeping us up.

Mrs. Marmalade: I'm sorry everyone. I'll have the whole mess straightened out in the morning.

Everyone: we would like that.

Mrs. Marmalade: goodnight.

Everyone: goodnight.

(& the next morning, Mrs. Marmalade was true to her word. she had everything straightened out, the windows were replaced, & everyone got a goodnight's sleep.)
there's a commotion going on in Pouchville can the Second Three figure out what the noise is?
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